I only learned of this webtoon a few weeks ago from an anonymous fan suggesting it to me (I honestly don't read webtoons, there's just other things that draw my attention more). So, I'm not sure if this is meant as an accusation that this is stealing a concept from that story or if it's merely an observation, but I feel the need to point out either way that stories take inspiration from each other all the time (to that point, I am sure that webtoon, like my story, is inspired by Faustian pacts but that doesn't mean we're both stealing from Dr. Faustus). Even if I had read this webtoon and decided to write this (which is not the case) then cool. Who cares? There's a lot of other stories that did inspire this one, and I'd be happy to talk about that if you (or anyone else) is curious. :)
Yeah, they might not be, and I hope that my response didn't sound harsh or anything, but that's a sentiment/critique I've seen a lot online and really can't tell their intent with the text available. And thank you, there's more content on its way soon :)
I didn't mean it as an accusation, I'm sorry if it came off that way. I was only pointing out the similar feel it had, as it's one of my favorite webtoons. I'm looking forward to more updates! The writing so far is great, and the dynamic Tommy has with the demon sets it apart from other IF's I've read.
Zorlok is the MC and the one who's perspective the rest of the story will be told from, though there may be sections in the future (like the prologue) that allow the player to see Tommy's perspective. Those would most likely be flashbacks, specials, or Zorlok looking through Tommy's eyes (via their bond).
Honestly I'm a big fan of the new prologue. Other than just the fact that I think it's better, it feels a lot more in line with Tommy I think. He doesn't basically erase someone for his own sake, instead it's all cause of 1 single sentence basically that was a pure accident.
Hi! Hope you're doing well. I've been waiting so long for the continuation of this and the rewrite did NOT disappoint. The detail that you can not agree to giving your soul and "bumping into" the demon and -i think it's one of three RO's- it's such a nice detail and leaves some questions. All in all it was great, thank you for taking you time on doing this <3.
I'm really happy that you managed to finish the new prologue and can't wait for the next update. Take it easy tho, please don't stress yourself too much and have a nice dayโค๏ธ
I loved the new prologue, the old one was more fun/funny with that unexpected command from Tommy, but new one is more dramatic and interesting. Liked the foreshadowing about memories and knowing the exact text of the contract added a sense of anticipation. Can't wait to see more
Although the wait felt like an eternity almost as if three years had passed I'm thrilled that the update has finally arrived. Itโs exciting to see it making a comeback, and I canโt wait to see what future updates will bring.
Yes, but it's optional. There's 8 characters your MC can have a relationship with (you can find descriptions of them above, click on the names for their descriptions to appear ๐)
this was so fun! even though we just got past the introduction, i was already invested in the story. if you ever decide to continue it, i'll be here to read
I must confess to being a little disappointed that the story doesn't extend beyond the introduction and contract. All the fun stuff in a story like this happens after that.
The setup is nice, though, and I think if you continue this it could be a really good game. I sincerely hope you keep working on it or that when you do continue it, I don't entirely forget about it as I tend to do.
Great concept. Good writing. Very descriptive and excellent use of music and audio to set the mood. To a small degree it makes me think of Lost Odyssey's A Thousand Years of Dreams and how whenever you unlock a memory in Kaim's past, you would get these visually simple and blurred, but still quite beautiful backgrounds and sounds and music would play as you progressed. It was just enough to help keep your attention and your game does some of that. I think it's something more text-based games should really consider. Atmosphere is everything.
Good luck and I hope to hear from you again! Kudos on the interesting prologue and the massive amount of choice given. I'll keep this save somewhere I can see it often to remind me to come back someday.
It's not abandoned, I just don't get much time to work on it between my jobs and personal life (for reference, this release was worked on largely during quarantine and when I was a student, so I had far more free time and far fewer options of what to do with it, I ended up hyperfixating on writing for months). Some people's behavior/reactions have left me feeling uncomfortable, frustrated, and/or drained, so I don't really post or talk about it much anymore. But, this is still being worked on regularly. I'm excited to share what I've been working on with you all soon (hopefully, things can be unpredictable this time of year but I'm feeling confident, tentatively). Thank you for your interest (and hopefully your understanding), it really does mean a lot to me.
Ah no worries, completely understandable. Take all the time you need. The concept is honestly great, and the story, even if it isn't too much, is great till now!
I'm really hopping this one is still active- I haven't been this emotionally invested on seeing the downfall of a cocky teen since watching Kim Possible back in the 2000s.
PLEASE, are you still working on this?? You don't know how much I love all of thisss :") It's been like two or one year, but this is soo good!! ๐ญ
Edit: Okay, so, I stalked the Zorlock's tumblr account for a few minutes and I think it's still active (?) Idk- But at least I'm gonna think it'll update soon HAKAHJAH-
Omggg, this was so much better that I expected, the customization (I can finally have the Adam Sandler fashion), the effects, the story too!! I am invested in this, hope to see more chapters!!
Zorlok has such a special place in my heart already.
Using sound effects and music to your advantage was an amazing idea and I absolutely love how well it fits into the story. It really sets this INF apart from others.
The amount of customization is really well done and while there is so so much variety, it never feels overwhelming. You've really given me so much to feel like this character is my own and that I can feel proud being represented by them.
Your writing and humor is really well done. Your work inspires me for my own story writing. I love how you are able to show subtlety so well, but also be so quick and witty. I can't help but smile whenever I notice those things in your work.
I love how much diversity your cast has, not only in race and queerness, but in physical differences, disabilities, and neurodiversity. I love how you allow these options in character creation as well and allow for prosthetics, touch-aversion, gender-affirming care, and audio descriptions. As a sex-repulsed ace person, I appreciate how sexual storylines are an option and not a requirement, and I really really appreciate how it is the same for romantic routes. As a poly person, I appreciate how much care you put into your poly-routes as well. I hope it seems obvious I've been scrolling Zorlok's tumblr for all this? Representation matters, thank you so much.
I've replayed the prologue and checked up on this game multiple times already, but I only noticed a few days ago that there's content I'm missing when I thought the story ended at the prologue.
I did mention this in the discord server, but I'm aware it isn't quite active and I didn't really get a response there- so I'll attach this here instead:
"I played Zorlok probably early-mid 2023 and I've been checking the game on itch several times whenever I remember it and occasionally replay it as well! I was thinking the game was still on some sort of hiatus because I never saw changes on the Itch page about any updates (including the dev log on itch, above the comment section), and when I replay it as well I don't see any update and I usually get the "this is the end of the demo" thing However, today I did notice some comments that reference other content, assuming from the first chapter, as well as in Tumblr, but I find it super unclear how to access the new updates/chapters ? Like is there something I'm missing? I will note, that when I checked today I used a previous save that I uploaded back to the game, 2 scenes before the "this is the end of the demo" screen, is that something messing up the updates on my end? /gq If not, where is the full game? /gq /nm If I were to suggest anything, it would 110% be a clear indicator in the description of the Itch page and Tumblr that includes:
the latest update date / what chapters are up currently (if I'm at the right Itch page in the first place)
if there are things/bugs (like me using a previous save to play) that prevent an update from showing up to add that info on Itch as well
* I've since tried replaying the game once more yesterday without using a previous save and got the same result, as well as clearing my cache (though with the current save I just played) and neither worked.
I don't mean to bother, I've just been itching to play for months now!
Thanks so much, and I hope you've been doing well lately โก
Not a bother at all! Still waiting but will totally update you if I get it fixed or get a response here or in the discord. Kinda glad I'm not alone, Hope you have a good one too! <3
I absolutely love this game, I love how we are able to customize are character deeply something most games do not have. I love customizing so this game is immediately a really great game for me. The plot is very interesting so I was a little disappointed when I reached the end. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!
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This reminds me an awful lot of the Webtoon, Love Advice From the Great Duke of Hell.
I only learned of this webtoon a few weeks ago from an anonymous fan suggesting it to me (I honestly don't read webtoons, there's just other things that draw my attention more). So, I'm not sure if this is meant as an accusation that this is stealing a concept from that story or if it's merely an observation, but I feel the need to point out either way that stories take inspiration from each other all the time (to that point, I am sure that webtoon, like my story, is inspired by Faustian pacts but that doesn't mean we're both stealing from Dr. Faustus). Even if I had read this webtoon and decided to write this (which is not the case) then cool. Who cares? There's a lot of other stories that did inspire this one, and I'd be happy to talk about that if you (or anyone else) is curious. :)
he probably isnt. Just pointing out it has same vibes. Honestly I loved this game and I was so sad it was just a demo. I really wanted more content
Yeah, they might not be, and I hope that my response didn't sound harsh or anything, but that's a sentiment/critique I've seen a lot online and really can't tell their intent with the text available. And thank you, there's more content on its way soon :)
I didn't mean it as an accusation, I'm sorry if it came off that way.
I was only pointing out the similar feel it had, as it's one of my favorite webtoons. I'm looking forward to more updates! The writing so far is great, and the dynamic Tommy has with the demon sets it apart from other IF's I've read.
Oh I love the new prologue. So hooked by the ending!
We are so back. New ending is way better than the old one, can't wait for more.
IT'S BACK!!!
Woah it's back! Super excited to replay the prologue and can't wait for more
I am so happy this is back, it's amazing and I cannot wait for more!
NO WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO THEM!?
Love the new prologue and the reason that human error causes the demon to forget instead of Tommy intentionally doing it.
soo i named the hellhound giggleshitter mcgee and made the pronouns my bbg/my bbg and i couldnt take this seriously
FINALLY SOME GOOD FOOD ON MY 2025 MEDIA PALETTE
Just a small question I've gad since its first release. Are we Tommy or Zorlok? Or are we going to control both?
Zorlok is the MC and the one who's perspective the rest of the story will be told from, though there may be sections in the future (like the prologue) that allow the player to see Tommy's perspective. Those would most likely be flashbacks, specials, or Zorlok looking through Tommy's eyes (via their bond).
Awwww i loved this so much!!! So glad it's back! ๐๐๐
Honestly I'm a big fan of the new prologue. Other than just the fact that I think it's better, it feels a lot more in line with Tommy I think. He doesn't basically erase someone for his own sake, instead it's all cause of 1 single sentence basically that was a pure accident.
Im actually going to cry happy tears this is the best early birthday gift ever!
I love love *LOVE* the rewrite and YVGNTVTBHUCFYHYV i just cannot say how much i love this enough!!
Cannot wait for more! (Obviously no rush at all though!!!)
Aw, thank you :) And Happy early birthday!!
Hi! Hope you're doing well. I've been waiting so long for the continuation of this and the rewrite did NOT disappoint. The detail that you can not agree to giving your soul and "bumping into" the demon and -i think it's one of three RO's- it's such a nice detail and leaves some questions. All in all it was great, thank you for taking you time on doing this <3.
I'm really happy that you managed to finish the new prologue and can't wait for the next update. Take it easy tho, please don't stress yourself too much and have a nice dayโค๏ธ
I loved the new prologue, the old one was more fun/funny with that unexpected command from Tommy, but new one is more dramatic and interesting. Liked the foreshadowing about memories and knowing the exact text of the contract added a sense of anticipation. Can't wait to see more
Although the wait felt like an eternity almost as if three years had passed I'm thrilled that the update has finally arrived. Itโs exciting to see it making a comeback, and I canโt wait to see what future updates will bring.
hi, is there going to be romance?
Yes, but it's optional. There's 8 characters your MC can have a relationship with (you can find descriptions of them above, click on the names for their descriptions to appear ๐)
this was so fun! even though we just got past the introduction, i was already invested in the story. if you ever decide to continue it, i'll be here to read
wishing you well, author and readers <3
as far as im aware this is still being continued, the author is just very busy right now, BUT! we should get an update soon(though this could change)
WOOHOO! thank you for informing me. this is great news :)
I must confess to being a little disappointed that the story doesn't extend beyond the introduction and contract. All the fun stuff in a story like this happens after that.
The setup is nice, though, and I think if you continue this it could be a really good game. I sincerely hope you keep working on it or that when you do continue it, I don't entirely forget about it as I tend to do.
Great concept. Good writing. Very descriptive and excellent use of music and audio to set the mood. To a small degree it makes me think of Lost Odyssey's A Thousand Years of Dreams and how whenever you unlock a memory in Kaim's past, you would get these visually simple and blurred, but still quite beautiful backgrounds and sounds and music would play as you progressed. It was just enough to help keep your attention and your game does some of that. I think it's something more text-based games should really consider. Atmosphere is everything.
Good luck and I hope to hear from you again! Kudos on the interesting prologue and the massive amount of choice given. I'll keep this save somewhere I can see it often to remind me to come back someday.
I'm curious, has this been abandoned? Cause I was honestly excited to actually get into it.
Seeing how its been 2 years with no update its a pretty high chance this is abandoned now (Which is sad because its such an interesting concept IMO)
It's not abandoned, I just don't get much time to work on it between my jobs and personal life (for reference, this release was worked on largely during quarantine and when I was a student, so I had far more free time and far fewer options of what to do with it, I ended up hyperfixating on writing for months). Some people's behavior/reactions have left me feeling uncomfortable, frustrated, and/or drained, so I don't really post or talk about it much anymore. But, this is still being worked on regularly. I'm excited to share what I've been working on with you all soon (hopefully, things can be unpredictable this time of year but I'm feeling confident, tentatively). Thank you for your interest (and hopefully your understanding), it really does mean a lot to me.
Ah alright! i totally understand! No rush(โแดโ)โ
Ah no worries, completely understandable. Take all the time you need. The concept is honestly great, and the story, even if it isn't too much, is great till now!
Tommy really dared to do that ๐ oh he's gonna be in trouble for that fr im petty LOL
Loved the game, but when are you going to update. Btw F- Tommy, and the guy under me doesn't brush his teeth three times a day.
lmfao, i non-respectuflly agree on that take
Im willing to wait 5 more years for this game. I love tommy.
well hello!! anyone knows in which format this was made?? im betting sugarcube but i might be wrong
I'm really hopping this one is still active- I haven't been this emotionally invested on seeing the downfall of a cocky teen since watching Kim Possible back in the 2000s.
PLEASE, are you still working on this?? You don't know how much I love all of thisss :") It's been like two or one year, but this is soo good!! ๐ญ
Edit: Okay, so, I stalked the Zorlock's tumblr account for a few minutes and I think it's still active (?) Idk- But at least I'm gonna think it'll update soon HAKAHJAH-
Are you still working on this game? I loved this demo, since these types of games are one of my favorites.
same question ^^^
epic momento
I LOVE THIS SM AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Omggg, this was so much better that I expected, the customization (I can finally have the Adam Sandler fashion), the effects, the story too!! I am invested in this, hope to see more chapters!!
Zorlok has such a special place in my heart already.
Using sound effects and music to your advantage was an amazing idea and I absolutely love how well it fits into the story. It really sets this INF apart from others.
The amount of customization is really well done and while there is so so much variety, it never feels overwhelming. You've really given me so much to feel like this character is my own and that I can feel proud being represented by them.
Your writing and humor is really well done. Your work inspires me for my own story writing. I love how you are able to show subtlety so well, but also be so quick and witty. I can't help but smile whenever I notice those things in your work.
I love how much diversity your cast has, not only in race and queerness, but in physical differences, disabilities, and neurodiversity. I love how you allow these options in character creation as well and allow for prosthetics, touch-aversion, gender-affirming care, and audio descriptions. As a sex-repulsed ace person, I appreciate how sexual storylines are an option and not a requirement, and I really really appreciate how it is the same for romantic routes. As a poly person, I appreciate how much care you put into your poly-routes as well. I hope it seems obvious I've been scrolling Zorlok's tumblr for all this? Representation matters, thank you so much.
I've replayed the prologue and checked up on this game multiple times already, but I only noticed a few days ago that there's content I'm missing when I thought the story ended at the prologue.
I did mention this in the discord server, but I'm aware it isn't quite active and I didn't really get a response there- so I'll attach this here instead:
"I played Zorlok probably early-mid 2023 and I've been checking the game on itch several times whenever I remember it and occasionally replay it as well! I was thinking the game was still on some sort of hiatus because I never saw changes on the Itch page about any updates (including the dev log on itch, above the comment section), and when I replay it as well I don't see any update and I usually get the "this is the end of the demo" thing However, today I did notice some comments that reference other content, assuming from the first chapter, as well as in Tumblr, but I find it super unclear how to access the new updates/chapters ? Like is there something I'm missing? I will note, that when I checked today I used a previous save that I uploaded back to the game, 2 scenes before the "this is the end of the demo" screen, is that something messing up the updates on my end? /gq If not, where is the full game? /gq /nm If I were to suggest anything, it would 110% be a clear indicator in the description of the Itch page and Tumblr that includes:
* I've since tried replaying the game once more yesterday without using a previous save and got the same result, as well as clearing my cache (though with the current save I just played) and neither worked.
I don't mean to bother, I've just been itching to play for months now!
Thanks so much, and I hope you've been doing well lately โก
Hi! Sorry if Iโm a bother, but have you managed to solve the issue?
I ask because I have been having the same exact problem, and Iโd REALLY like to solve it myself.
Thank you regardless, and again, sorry if I was a bother
Have a good one <3
Not a bother at all! Still waiting but will totally update you if I get it fixed or get a response here or in the discord. Kinda glad I'm not alone, Hope you have a good one too! <3
Thousands of thanks!
Then I shall retreat to the shadows and lurk in the discord, awaiting my chance to play Zorlock >:3
Really enjoyed reading this ๐
And the mc reminds me of sukuna lol
Is this project abandoned?
Nope!
I love this so much- the interactions between the demon and Tommy are great, too!!! Great work!
i loved it, from start to finish. can't wait for the full release. saw ur update, don't push it!! love yourself buddy
This is so fantastic!!!
This is such and awesome demo! I love the diversity in character customization and Tommy is such a funny character. Looking forward to more!
I absolutely love this game, I love how we are able to customize are character deeply something most games do not have. I love customizing so this game is immediately a really great game for me. The plot is very interesting so I was a little disappointed when I reached the end. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!
I don't know why but I spent so much time on customizing 'Zorlok' :') But I love this so far!! cant wait for an update!!โกโกโก
I hope the first chapter is released soon. I can't wait to continue!
Thank you! It's on its way. You can read the most recent update here.