Category Archives: Fiction

An Offering of Scares

Netflix has been attempting to become a studio as well as a streaming service and have been pushing ever-more netflix-produced content to the fore as well. The quality’s varied wildly, with a few gems of filmmaking and television mixed into an enormous amount of false starts.

Personally, I’ve been on a horror binge lately. I am an absolute coward and used to be terrified of the genre, but a few friends have eased me into it and now I can’t get enough of the stuff. Netflix’s regular trickle of new horror pieces is a great source of new scares, and I find myself revisiting it regularly.

So with that in mind let’s talk about some of Netflix’s horror entries. Korean television drama Kingdom, creature feature The Monster, and Final Destination-esque black comedy Velvet Buzzsaw.

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Benioff, Weiss, and the Illusion of Writing

Nothing in a work of fiction happens because “that’s the character’s personality” or “that’s the way the world works” or “it’s just logical”, it happens because the writer chose for it to happen. The writer’s trick is disguising this. In presenting a story that is seamless enough that the truth is not realized or does not matter. This illusion is verisimilitude and it requires significant investment to maintain.

George RR Martin was a master of it. Ned’s death, the Red Wedding, the ever more racist narrative of Essos all clearly fit in the world. Plot developments might surprise but are clear results of the actions and motivations of the characters. Regardless of what you thought of the content, the events seem to be the clear consequences of actions taken rather than Martin just deciding what was going to happen next.

Benioff and Weiss (Occasionally called D&D) are not. And that gap in their skillset torpedoed the final season of Game of Thrones. It disappointed millions and ruined the reputation of a series previously considered the height of prestige TV.

But for us, that failure is a great learning opportunity. One that’ll involve spoilers, but if that bothers you, consider this your warning. Read the rest of this entry

Incident Eliph at Kianid: Arc One

So we’re through that first stage of Incident Eliph, and with it the first stage of this new run at writing. To mark the occasion I wanted to take a moment, look at the project as a whole, and talk about why Eliph is shaping up as it did. What influenced it, some of the worldbuilding and the decisions that went into designing it.

Incident Eliph is a Quest, a type of interactive fiction that evolved from text-based adventure games, 4chan, and Andrew Hussie in no particular order. A better summation of its history than I could hope to provide is here, but for our purposes you need to know the following: Quests are stories where the writer (Or Quest Master) gets input from the players on the actions of characters or things going on inside of the narrative. I’ve been writing them for something close to seven years.

The story itself is a Fantasy/Horror quest set in an alternate Ottoman Empire. It takes inspiration from the Leviathan series Scott Westerfeld, The Thing, the art of Keith Thompson, Triumff by Dan Abnett, and City of Brass by SA Chakraborty; aiming for an aesthetic that marries bizarre mechanical advances and the prominence of Djinn with grotesque biological horror. At the character level we follow Yousuf Oziri, an officer in the Ottoman Empire, recovering with his platoon on the island of Kianida after a disastrous offensive in Russia.

This is not the largest or the most popular project I’ve undertaken in the field, but it is the first one I’m really actively marketing to people and the first one I’m trying to treat as a professional product. It’s the public facing part of the writing push I outlined in November and the only content currently linked to my Ko-Fi account. As such it is disproportionately personally important, a test of if I can really commit to a schedule and if people might be willing to buy into a patreon or other self-published offerings. Of my skill as a pseudo-professional instead of a hobbyist.

Below the cut are spoilers for the first eight updates (About twelve thousand words) of Incident Eliph. So if this has you interested and you haven’t checked it out yet, I highly recommend reading the story here before continuing.

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Once More Into The Breach

Whoof, three years since I’ve been here. A lot has happened, graduated from college, got a job, lost my gallbladder…

None of it really explains or excuses abandoning pretty much all of my projects here though. So, uh, this is gonna get kind of personal so I’ll explain what happened and the plan moving forwards under the cut.

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